Its a downer of a day
all miserable, angry
no other way,
weathers so dreary,
clouds so grey,
tucked in a grizzly bed
that`s were we stay,
hoping that goodness... comes are way.
You wrote about the rain and brought sunshine to my day. Good trick! !
Great! Though this poem was about 'downers', it kind of made me cheer up a little? =) nice job!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You do a fine job expressing the misery of a gray day, yet managing to work in a bit of hope. Peace, L&T