Jhonny Thermidor

Dream

A dream can only be a real dream,
When it acquires indefatigable efforts,
when its attainment is wrapped by obstacles.

Its real fascination can be marred.
But only if a man show lack of seriousness
While facing formidable obstacles.

Keep not your skills remaining latent,
They're all needed to deceive obstacles
But only if you fear nothing but fear itself.

A man might be fluent to fail better
But not ardent to even attempt to succeed.
Optimism is the key in majoring your dream!

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2008

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  • Evaughn GrayEvaughn Gray (6/18/2008 10:53:00 PM)

    wow that was georgous, i truly loved it..~love Hazel

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  • Jolenish Fiber (6/18/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    true, and very colorful vocabulary, but try not to overdue it. the last stanza is my favartite

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