Saturday, October 8, 2011

Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

Written on: 2/17/11

I like to fantasize of the day
you come knocking on my door and say
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Rebekah Morgan
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Romeo Della Valle 08 October 2011

Impressive! This well penned and poignant write clearly shows your great poetic potential which I think you should keep it up! 10+++ The title of this amazing write caught my immediate attention because I recently posted one also titled: DREAMS, I hope whenever time permits, your would read it and enjoy! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Stefanie Fontker 08 October 2011

I like that the final two lines end with a rhyme. Lovely writing. I will definitely take a look at some more of your poetry.

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