This is just your first poem posted to this forum, I must say you have a long way to go, dear poet! Just six lines have captured a dream so well and described it so succinctly! I rate this poem 10/10.
'Yet here you are
so flawlessly
Deeper than my deepest depths'... So beautifully said!
I cordially welcome you here and look forward to reading many more of your poems.
If you have time, please read some of mine too and say a few words as feedback.
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This is just your first poem posted to this forum, I must say you have a long way to go, dear poet! Just six lines have captured a dream so well and described it so succinctly! I rate this poem 10/10. 'Yet here you are so flawlessly Deeper than my deepest depths'... So beautifully said! I cordially welcome you here and look forward to reading many more of your poems. If you have time, please read some of mine too and say a few words as feedback.