Dream Of Hope Poem by Tharindu Atukorala

Dream Of Hope

Rating: 5.0


It’s a warm and beautiful night,
As I wander outside
So gentle a breeze brushing my skin
The strong scent of flowers, fills in the air
And as I look up, at an endless sky
Dotted with sparkling tiny stars
I see you my love,
I begin to miss you more and more
And yet I’ve never known you
So how is it my darling, that I miss you so?
Yearn for your touch,
Long to be held in your arms
Miss your sweet lips that I never kissed
Desire your love that not exists?
So tell me my love, how is it that I miss you so
When you are but only a dream of hope?

26/09/2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jen Capaldi 10 October 2009

a beautiful poem. every word is seeping emotions of sadness, love, and longing. great flow to it and superior wording to make your reader fall into your words and yearn with you for an unrequited love. all i can say is an excellent poem my friend. keep writing and keep looking to the stars and heavens, they will guide your way to the one. all of the elements of a great peom, passion, your heart and a desire for that one true thing that can turn your world into the perfect life. love.10 +++ Jen

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 28 September 2009

This poem is simply beautiful.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 September 2009

real passion, unadulteratedly versed. shan

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