Dreamin' Poem by Reyna Lyn Angulo Sahagun

Would this poem from me possibly be helpful to either of your daughters? ...' What Is A Great Guy? ', She Asked Her Mom.... [loneliness; Choosing A Mate; Medium; Bri's Advice Column; Serious, Seriously! ]

I've determined from your Poet's notes that you are about my daughter's age, and, from your bio, that your daughters, boht 'lovely and brillisnt' might have a grandfather MY age (good grief!) . Maybe they could learn from this poem of mine: (cont.) (free to kids of members!)

Thanks for your Poet's Notes btw. Your bio here states: 'Associate Professor, teaching major subjects in English'. Let''s see if I can teach a teacher something! ! The losest mark/grade I ever got in high school was a D (not good) once in English.

I'm 'stretching a bit', but I'll give 4 stars. Well, you WERE young when you wrote it! Ha ha. bri p.s. I looked up 'glory' and I doubt it is correct here.

'And build happy moments in my heart.' THAT's a very nice (and I guess 'poetic') line. : ) last stanza: I'd use 'plays' again here.

line 8: 'Draw the sparkle'? Would someone, in this case, be a friend/lover, or an artist, or an eye doctor, OR...an all-three-in-one person? ?

line 3: 'sighting'? Perhaps you meant 'sighing' or might want to use 'gazing'? ? line 4: you COULD do without 'to come'. line 5: I'd use 'into'.

your poem: line 2: 'lying' You MIGHT be surprised by how many people I've heard/'read' would use (incorrectly) 'laying'.