elhen walter

Rookie - 276 Points (September 21,1994 / philippines)

Dreaming - Poem by elhen walter

The rain doesn't seem to stop
As I walk the streets wanderingly
I feel lost and adrift
Take me somewhere nice
And I shall rest there

Topic(s) of this poem: love

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/28/2015 12:53:00 PM)

    Take me somewhere nice
    And I shall rest there your desire, wish and longing and search for real love is depicted in these short lines. thank you very much
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  • Ramesh T A (8/27/2015 1:14:00 PM)

    It happens so in dream and if rest is possible somewhere, it is good accept it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 27, 2015

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