Dreaming Poem by Adrian Murphy

Dreaming



Hours and minutes have ponderously run their course.
My teenage excitement is barely contained,
Like an anxious father patiently waiting outside the maternity ward, I pace
Pace to exhaust those last few minutes
How slow can a second really be? ? ?

I am off.
Road signs flash past me as I race toward you
My leaden foot eagerly consuming the miles.
My heartbeat quickening with every minute that passes
My smile growing broader with every second.

Tap, tap tap.
I step back and wait, hands nervously squeezing a heady bouquet
A face appears from behind the door, nervously checking.
Our eyes meet and a wondrous smile engulfs the doorway,
I am captured, ever more to be held in that moment.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sans Serif 11 September 2009

I like the sense of how it flows and the rhyming. great write.

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Stephen Stirk 12 June 2009

A lovely well written poem. It flows well, and there is good rythmn. Most enjoyable Best Steve

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