Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Dreaming Of Light. Comments

Rating: 5.0

From limitless Love came earth's first light.
I saw each shadow clothed with liquid sound.
Rays of crystal-clear air spread and heightened.
In the dream, light was glorified when founded.
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Fay Slimm
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Obinna Eruchie 01 September 2009

Light full of beauty manifesting like a dream. This is a beautifully penned poem.

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 August 2009

Wowww Fay.. This is wonderful... As always does gives that soothing effect to the reader... Hey I am very tired today.. Our uni started today... Very nice to read.. I love these poems Fay, but do you really think life is as beautiful as it seems... I love living in this world of poems, filled with love, passion.. helps our mind so much.. But real life realy hard isn't it? /., .. very good poem.. thank you.. With love shan

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Yelena M. 24 August 2009

..Festooning the air Love had employed To bear this beauty eyes had never seen. Earth, lit by first light, sparkled with joy.. Light as love and beauty expressed so vividly in your poem, Fay..as always you amaze me with images you paint..thanks for sharing with us! Yelena M.

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Bob Gibson 19 August 2009

This light i have seen, many times in the sky such a powerful force, beyond you and I does it herald the birth, of one that's been born or welcome the grace of one passing by?

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Carol Gall 19 August 2009

so so beautiful into my favs its so lovely 10

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Fay Slimm

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