Dreams Comments

dreams are the work of minds, but sometimes a clue you should pursue.

'Those that succeed and fly above use all are they any better then those who stumbled' such a good question! ! i guess it's really an opinion question. i also wanted to point out that after the word 'above' you spelled 'us', 'use'. not correcting you, i just wanted to let you know. for some reason, poems that dont rhyme, dont always catch my eye, but this poem is sooo good! it just makes sense and really is deep. good work! ! : ] <3