Sunday, May 18, 2014

Dreams With Open Eyes Comments

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As I imagine, my heart beats to its beat. every little things i see my emotions sails in a sea.With a open eyes there is a dream as smooth as a cream.

Humpty-Dumpty walk i take my friends says lets take a break.
You are too old for that childish walk, lets take elder's crawl.
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 April 2016

But all these are just dreams which i have seen with open eyes. Ah! there is a battle tomorrow and I got no time. a very fine poem. lot of imagination somehow bound together with the realities also. well phrased. thank you very much. tony

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