Dreamzz Poem by veena yadav

Dreamzz

Rating: 5.0


I wish If i get an opportunity of braking all the BARRIERS.....
BARRIERS which is the only reason for the distance between us, though you standing infront of me.......
You standing infront of me, I wish you could take me on a long ride where I would have the complete FREEDOM of looking into your eyes and you understanding me......
You speaking sweet thoughts about yourself and I praising your thoughts....
Then when the sun is about to return its home, I would hold you tight by your wrist....
Sitting on a lonely bench I would whisper in your ears, 'CAN I GET THE PERMISSION OF SEEING YOU IN MY DREAMZZ? '
DREAMZZ! Yes, thats the only place where I can be with you forever and ever....
And hearing this your INNOCENT LOUD LAUGHTER drives me mad again...
I again whisper in your ears saying 'THANKYOU'...
THANKYOU fo ralways being what you are...
And then before everything comes in its place, we are back home...
OH, WHAT A DREAM IT WAS!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 19 March 2015

well done veena. a bol beautiful and touching poem surya.

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Surya . 18 November 2011

a great romantic piece. indeed yourcphrase 'i could look in to your eyes' are wonderful that gives a real feel to it. thanks for invite.by the way i put 10 marks but it is not loaded.any way to marks to you dear. surya

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