Monday, November 25, 2013

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Wingless, I was in a ditch
Crawling to stand
Water; the life nectar
Was eating me
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Aftab Alam
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Dinesan Madathil 25 November 2013

What a fine note of philosophy have you brought to our perusal Alamji? Every line is remarkably endearing and your style and diction are wondeful.. Keep writing like this sir.

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Dinesan Madathil 25 November 2013

What a fine note of philosophy have you brought to our perusal Alamji? Every line is remarkably endearing and your style and diction are wondeful.. Keep writing like this sir.

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