Saturday, October 31, 2015

Drop In Temperature Comments

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Margaret Moran
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Brian Mayo 31 October 2015

As well as what? A little confusing, but that can be a good thing in a haiku. The cold speaks for itself, but the body feels it too- - Meaning the cold has affected everything visible (frost, etc) , but also the bones...maybe? Is that close? I like your haiku. I think it works.

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