Monday, February 6, 2017

Drowning In Dark Matter Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just another stone underwater
Just another star in space
He kept on falling farther
All his life was a race
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Joshua Renner
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Chinedu Dike 06 February 2017

A good depiction of the devastating effects of depression - loss of sunshine in a life at its deplorable low ebb, is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in good diction with conviction. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Joshua. Please have a look at my poems.

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