Friday, March 30, 2007

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Rating: 4.0

high noon
and the sun is at eleven
changing shifts
in the desert...cactus spikes
...
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Robert Combs
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Joy Vanderhelm 30 March 2007

A stellar piece. Great language, well drawn imagery. The last line caught me off guard, it ended it so well. I enjoyed every moment. Bet, Joy

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