Duck Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Duck

Rating: 5.0

he sits on the roof
of the building opposite
I sit on the sofa
glimpsed from the window;
him with his feathers
me with my skin;
themes tune
and blossom falls
from trees
like plates don't fall
out of the cupboard
and we could go on
like that for hours
such
was the relationship
we had

Wednesday, September 6, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: ducks,happenings,life,relationship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Duck - a poem by Clive Culverhouse. A brief tale of how lives play out independantly of one another.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clive Culverhouse 07 October 2023

I put this poem on Poetry Soup, here's a comment 'Ah, wonderful exchange of visual here. I like the way this relationship is described.'

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Belle Wassermeister 06 September 2023

Did you ever try to meet him? Did he duck out on you?

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Clive Culverhouse 11 September 2023

Actually he hasn't been round for a while so he must have done. Thanks for taking the time to comment

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