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Very true. Powerful because it is simple and unpretentious.

wow i liked this phrase very much 'But just look out and watch me close Cause I’m now a different girl I will never date a swine again Cause I’m a shining pearl' nice one sir..i enjoyed it very much 10++

Now, in this one you are a young girl bemoaning a lost love. Since when did you change from a husband. Perhaps you write in the third person, so to speak. Every one of your poems have a line or two which really recommends it. Adeline

How well you managed to keep the rhyme all the way through. another great read Jack. a pleasure to read.10/10/10 Regards Dave T

lol this made me smile oh Jackie boy! lol and it's true, we do eventually get over being blown away! well some do! others pursue the barstewards to their lying graves! lol just testing! lol It does change a person, as does all experience Jack! lol only I have a confession to make! bad boys always get under my sin radar....I just ask for it! lol sweet dreams...Tai, waving at you x