Sunday, February 18, 2007

Dying Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think I may be dying
(really)
My mind is numb
The numbness is spreading
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jennifer killian
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Catastrophe King 20 February 2007

Dying.... is an expression which is not easy to express by ordinary poets. You have done it so beautifully. The imageries are perfectly setting into that frame. You have done it. I hope you read the ones I had done on these theme. A perfect 10 for you here.

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Poornima Kanasen 18 February 2007

Hey Jennifer, Nice write...I enjoyed reading it...Death is for sure..Let's live every moment of our time as if there is no tomorrow...Keep up your good work! ! ! K.Poornima

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