E.M Poem by tyler eisner

E.M



Best-friend’s girlfriend. An option? Not so much
A nerd, like I, and Lego’s same
The inspiration to a gift to GFATT
Studs. Lego studs. Red. Small. Cheep.
High school brings a break up inevitably
Friendship grows closer between us, maybe too close
Relationship sprouts. Inevitably.
Faulty text, never seen by me, wanting breakup
Who sabotaged, hacked, tricked, not sure
Friendship grows distant. Love burning deep still
“Temma will never die”. Gas on
An attempt to ignite the spark
But too much gas is released.
Fire burns the played heart, soul, and mind.

I am finished, or is she not
I move on, or does she not
I loop back, and she did not
A kiss found on a dragged floor
Speech prepared, not delivered

So again, “ people are the harshest critiques”
And she was

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the last stanza makes me sound mean but that last stanza was about her judgment of C
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kendy Hox 11 January 2014

i am a little confused by ur note about ur poem. so she was mean and a harsh critic about c?

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Tyler Eisner 26 September 2015

she was being a jealous critic of my relationship with c. that is why i wrote about people are the harshest critics.

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