Saturday, December 19, 2020

Early October Musings: (Ward Jackson Park: Hartlepool, October 7th,2020) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Early October: soft winds breathe out leaves
Across the park. They rustle. O they spill
Their vibrant colours like confetti dreams!
Shadows lengthen; soon all will be filled
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Shaun Cronick 19 December 2020

A well scribed Autumn poem with a clear message that eventually comes to us all. Enjoyed the well crafted ending and the flawed actor reference, so smoothly done. AFS and richly deserved my friend. Take care and simply enjoy life and poetry.

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