Early Wealth. Poem by Fay Slimm

Early Wealth.

Rating: 5.0


The wealth of green
....................has disappeared.
Now tarred and bricked,
................ the earth is choked
I stare in awesome
..................................disbelief.
Stood here is car
...................... instead of oak.

The sleepy village
.................. wakes to shrieks.
With noise disturbing
........................... all in Church.
Hoots from horns
............ distressing preacher.
I now find Snacks
......... where once were birch.

Shops and trolleys
.......... line the stream's bank.
We played out here
...................... from early light.
For those old days
............... I feel most thankful.
Now death-knells chime
........... for greenfield's plight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 10 September 2009

I love this poem! it comes from an ageless/ timeless perspective riddled with memories of what used to be. a 10 and a bit Fay!

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Carol Gall 09 September 2009

wow excellence in writing 10

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