Echoes Poem by Elvin Joju

Echoes



The King of the beasts deep in the wood
Roared as loudly as it could

Right away the echo came back
And the Lion thought itself under attack

"What voice is that roars like mine? "
The echo replied "mine, mine…"

"Who might you be? " asked the furious lion
"I'm king of this jungle, this jungle is mine"

And the echo came back a second time
"This jungle is mine, is mine, is mine…"

The lion swore revenge only if it could
Discover the intruder in the wood.

It roared, "Coward! Come out and show yourself! "
But the fearless echo replied simply "… elf, elf…"

"Come out" said the lion, "enough deceit"
"Do you fear, for your own defeat? "

But all the echo did was repeat
"Defeat… defeat… defeat…"

Frightened by every conceivable sound
The exhausted lion sank to the ground

A bird in a tree looked down and it said
"Dear lion, I'm afraid what you hear
Is simply the voice of your lion-sized fear"

Tuesday, October 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,children,funny
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is a poem written by my 10 year old son Elvin. Please give your comments
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaithra 02 October 2018

Wow Awesome....:

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Remya arun 02 October 2018

Good one elvin dear..expecting more ...👍👍

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Purnima 02 October 2018

Very nice.well.done.keep writing.

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Divya 02 October 2018

Very nice... :) way to go

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Augustine 02 October 2018

Remarkable Elvin kuttan at this small age. You have a wonderful time ahead. Keeps on writing.

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Susan Williams 09 November 2018

Elvin is a prodigy! ! ! ! I enjoyed this so very much- -rich in humor and talent- - want to read More from his pen please! ! ! ! ! !

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Roshna 07 October 2018

Wonderful Keep writing Elvin

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Sahar Banu 05 October 2018

Awesome...Alluring poem.keep up the good work Elvin

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Shamla Maroof 03 October 2018

Good one dear..keep writing

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Annie Sheen 03 October 2018

Beautiful

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