Echos Poem by Jacob Courtney

Echos

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Your words are echos
that just travel down
drawing those who hear
near you. They brought
me close to you with no
intent to ever leave for
your words are a sudctive
poison that kills before
its to late. Yet I heard
your words for what they
really are. Now I no longer
hear them for I am gone with
no desire to hear your lies.

Your beauty is a sirens
song that messmerizes all
who gaze upon you. It brought
me within your cluches and
forever blinding me from all
others. Yet I saw you for what
you are in the end. Your beauty
hides your sadness and your
bitterness. It hides the cracks
that are deep within you. I no
longer wish to gaze upon you. I
will no longer be under your spell.

You are nothing but
echos of a past that
has no happiness no
peace. You will be
surrounded by the echos
of your lies
for all time.

Friday, March 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is the opposite of the black rose.. good work bro..

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Ency Bearis 07 March 2009

superb narrative write...well done..10

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