Eclipse Of Soul: Spiritual Crisis Poem by Bharat Thiyam

Eclipse Of Soul: Spiritual Crisis

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​Sparkling like a blazing sun
Creeping like a dark shadow
Sinking like a heavy stone
Drifting like a leaf
Seeing is believing.
Swimming like a fish on land
Emerging from the canopy of darkness
Rising like a sun in the east
Moving through the quiet eclipse
Charming eyes of the sunlit moon
Bringing sick, sleepless hours to live

Eclipse Of Soul: Spiritual Crisis
Saturday, November 7, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: fish,sick,sun,swimming
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem draws readers into the heart of a spiritual crisis by intertwining powerful natural metaphors that reflect the complexity of human emotion. Each line offers a striking image—the blazing sun of inspiration, the creeping shadow of doubt, the heavy stone of despair, and a drift leaf of uncertainty. These shifting states mimic the inner turbulence we feel when confronted with moments of existential questioning or deep emotional pain. The reference to 'seeing is believing' challenges readers to look beyond the surface of their struggles, urging them to confront uncomfortable truths and embrace vulnerability. As the poem unfolds, it transitions from turmoil to renewal. The 'canopy of darkness' lifts, giving way to the rising sun, a universal symbol of hope and new beginnings. The metaphorical journey through an eclipse captures the idea that growth often requires moving through darkness and uncertainty. The concluding lines, invoking 'charming eyes of the sunlit moon' and 'sick, sleepless hours', hint at both the suffering and the allure of transformation. Readers are left with a sense of anticipation and excitement—the poem invites them to explore their own spiritual landscapes and find beauty in the cycles of struggle and healing.
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