Wednesday, August 6, 2008

Ego-Sway Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's myopic to claim
We're not all the same.
Separation always holds sway
If vanity's call that
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Fay Slimm
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Stacey Watts 08 September 2008

This is truly a wonderful poem. You are extremely talented..

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Marvin Brato 14 August 2008

Without an Ego, how can we learn to understand and respect ourselves, and others too? Its how we control that ego within us that defines the margin between if its getting good or bad. Nice poem, a 10.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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