Eight Line Curse Poem by Sailing to windward

Eight Line Curse



An eight line verse I tried to write,
It kept me up near half the night.
Twas not so much the missing rhyme
More vexing was the metre's time.
When in the end my pen laid flat,
the paper bin was bursting fat.
How sad, the promise of that verse
became instead an evil curse.

Sunday, December 29, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 24 January 2014

Cute little verse. You wondered why I suggest a poem. It's just that something in the poem seems to conjure up a thought in mine, sort of an answer to your poem. For that reason I suggest - A Writer's Dilemma - Adeline

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Gajanan Mishra 29 December 2013

promise of verse, good write, thanks.

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Sailing to windward

Sailing to windward

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