El En Que Intento Poesia Española Poem by Kat Smith

yes i do speak a little Spanish(no Google translate i swear) , i have been taking it since kindergarten (i went too private school up until 8th grade which is why i speak it so well most of my family only speaks English)
i decided i would take one of my simpler poems and attempt to translate it into Spanish please tell me how i did. if you speak Spanish and this is all wrong don't hesitate to tell me and i will be posting this in English.