Eleventh Hour Poem by Scribbler Sheridan

Eleventh Hour

Rating: 5.0


Breathe in,
Look away,
Once more, and I am sure it's the same.
Close my eyes,
No change,
A year past, a decade before, and the truth is unalterable,
Fate, the trickster, has trapped me now:
Woe is me.

Thursday, January 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: lost,lost love,love
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Maxim Muyu 06 January 2018

Add a comment.nice poem

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Chinedu Dike 04 January 2018

The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly portrayed in the poem. Love appears unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not nurtured at all times by both couples to maintain its bliss. An insightful heartfelt rendition. Thanks for sharing Sheridan.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Scribbler. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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