Thursday, January 4, 2018

Eleventh Hour Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breathe in,
Look away,
Once more, and I am sure it's the same.
Close my eyes,
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Scribbler Sheridan
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Maxim Muyu 06 January 2018

Add a comment.nice poem

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Chinedu Dike 04 January 2018

The whimsical and temperamental nature of love are aptly portrayed in the poem. Love appears unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not nurtured at all times by both couples to maintain its bliss. An insightful heartfelt rendition. Thanks for sharing Sheridan.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Scribbler. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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