Elizabeth's Consent. Comments

Now this is the question Fay. Oh how you can torment us with your talented writing. Must away and look further.....10 love Karin

Elizabeth and plain Thomas Bate, it seems they did procreate Men in uniform and maidens fair, to the wind they throw all care since the time, in days old, uniformed they're brave and bold what maiden could resist the sight, of a brave and shinning knight? ?

Fay, Good part, I wait to continuation..10... Tsira

Fay, nice to read something different. I liked the layout of this piece, and look forward to the next part of your well written poem. Regards, Ian

oh fay getting better all the time