Monday, September 7, 2009

Elizabeth's Happiness. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thomas her lover,
........................ then rallied strong men
Who, warriors bold,
........................ came fierce to the wall
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Fay Slimm
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Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Its a nice type of writing 10s

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i loved that you said.. the end....... like most fairytales........ i like it much.i like what you are doing with the form.

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Lynda Robson 07 September 2009

A nice ending to your poems on Elizabeth, well composed Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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