Elusive Happiness Poem by Somali K Chakrabarti

Elusive Happiness

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A

whiff of

sweet fragrance

wafting through air,

crisp ray of sunshine

in a misty morning that

vanishes as soon as it

appears; Elusive happiness

finds us and fades away as we seek

it frantically at each turn along the way

Elusive Happiness
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Etheree is a form of poetry that consists of 10 un-rhymed lines ascending in syllable count from 1 to 10.
The poem is from my kindle book 'Lei: A wreath for your soul'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 March 2016

Elusive happiness is like a vanishing mirage in vast desert. - '...finds us and fades away as we seek it frantically at each turn along the way.' A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned in beautiful poetic structure with conviction. Thanks for sharing Somali. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Hi Chinedu, Thanks a lot for the wonderful comment. I read your poem Mandela - The Immortal Icon and found it to be inspiring and informative

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