Embrace The Planet Poem by Liza Sud

Embrace The Planet



I suggest you hugging the planet.
if for other things you're too young.
'didn't give enough, no money'-
that's eternal question of man.

there is noone more egoistic
than a man. What for does he live?
in life they often see no reason.
It is God and to merge with Him -

I explain to them. For the Russians
It is difficult, they are dull.
Because God doesn't keep silence.
that is why I speak so sad.

Only Christ could embrace the planet
and defend us from evil force.
we together may also manage,
if our selfhood is overthrown.

so beautiful, without weapons,
it was once and for all times!
this name eveyone will remember
who just once came upon Christ.

Tuesday, February 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: men
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 17 February 2016

Your poem highlights our challenge to fulfill the two commandments Jesus told a young man were the only essential ones: Love God/Love your neighbor. The crisis that inspired your poem reminds Tolstoy was tormented by the fact he could love humanity as an abstraction but found many individuals unlovable. We could complacent and say, So it goes. But you are unwilling to give up on ALTRUISM which is a new theme in your poems and because of your influence I've been dealing with it. I agree human beings are weak when it comes to cosmic tasks, but we were created according to Scriptures as limited beings. We can't compare to angels in power. Arguably more is expected of human beings than of angels. Of course none of this matters, Tolstoy's torment, God'silence, my doubts if you are blessed with faith! !

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