Liza Sud

My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom, - Poem by Liza Sud

My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.

she has so many intonations
as happy as from native fields,
and when she laughs in conversations -
the world smiles at me with more gleam! -

Topic(s) of this poem: mother

Comments about My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom, by Liza Sud

  • Chinedu Dike (3/5/2017 10:59:00 AM)

    Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed. (Report) Reply

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  • Johnmark O Okechukwu (11/5/2016 2:29:00 PM)

    Good piece! Mother; our first love (Report) Reply

  • V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy (4/2/2016 3:44:00 AM)

    Overt love of every child about mom, our mother is the best, nice poem perfect 10 (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/21/2016 9:59:00 PM)

    Such a thoughtful tribute to mother! (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (12/16/2015 6:44:00 PM)

    Lovely poem a bout your mother. Brings back memories of my own mother, who passed away many years ago. You might enjoy reading my poem about her called MEMORIES OF MOTHER.
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  • (10/28/2015 7:34:00 AM)

    This touching poem reminds me of my faraway mum. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Amrod (10/27/2015 9:32:00 AM)

    Sweetened with a child's love of the marvelous person that gifted you with life and with her charm and boundless love exudes radiantly her beams of care and optimism. Very lovely, Paul (Report) Reply

  • (10/26/2015 4:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful.. Thank you Liza. I have also written on the wonders of the mother. Please do read when you get a chance. I think you might also enjoy it. It is called Mother Dearest (Report) Reply

  • Titto Mutunguti (10/25/2015 5:56:00 AM)

    we all love our mothers..lovely piece (Report) Reply

  • Shahin Latif (10/22/2015 3:19:00 AM)

    Excellent Poem. I read your poem & I feel my mother who had died in a long time ago. Lovely narrated poem.Thank you so much dearest poet Liza Sud. (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2015 9:01:00 PM)

    Lovely expression, nice and inspiring (Report) Reply

  • Sara Militello (10/20/2015 1:22:00 PM)

    A nice warm poetic celebration of one's mother. What a wonderful gift to feel such pride relative to her mother! Many people are not so lucky to think that highly of their moms. This poem catches the spirit of a woman who has retained the characteristics of a youthful, unspoiled time in her life. Good for her! and Hurrahs for a poet! (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/19/2015 1:20:00 AM)

    A great tribute to a loving mother! Who else can command more love and admiration than a mother! She is the symbol of unconditional love! Loved reading the poem! (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    : -) I like very gentle (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2015 11:32:00 AM)

    when she laughs in conservation
    the world smiles at me with more gleam
    I like yesyesyes -
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  • Pamela Sinicrope (10/14/2015 9:12:00 AM)

    What a great poem about your mom. I can imagine her there smiling! I love that you compared her to a flower.I intend to write a poem about my mother but haven't yet. Thanks for sharing this gem! (Report) Reply

  • (10/13/2015 2:33:00 PM)

    I can see and hear your mother talking..
    Exquisite! Thanks Liza!
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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/13/2015 2:00:00 PM)

    A lovely homage to one's mother (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (10/1/2015 9:42:00 AM)

    What a wonderful homage to a parent! It seems she is retired from the task of raising you and can relax now that you are grown up. She can look at you from her chair and smile, and think, Well, that went well. I remember when Liza was a helpless baby, then a needy child, then an independent teenager and now an adult. Now, I can rest from
    the work of parenting and just feel proud. My Liz is a flower in bloom! My mother died two years ago at age 91 and I think I saw her while reading your poem and writing this passage. It's a good feeling.
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  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (9/25/2015 3:49:00 AM)

    Great tribute to a loving mother. Very well written. +10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 13, 2015

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