My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom, Poem by Liza Sud

My Mother - A Fantastic Blossom,

Rating: 4.7


My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.

she has so many intonations
as happy as from native fields,
and when she laughs in conversations -
the world smiles at me with more gleam! -

Sunday, September 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Militello 20 October 2015

A nice warm poetic celebration of one's mother. What a wonderful gift to feel such pride relative to her mother! Many people are not so lucky to think that highly of their moms. This poem catches the spirit of a woman who has retained the characteristics of a youthful, unspoiled time in her life. Good for her! and Hurrahs for a poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2015

and when she laughs in conversations - the world smiles at me with more gleam! -.......mother's smile means smile of world too, so nicely and vividly envisioned and beautifully depicted. Thanks sharing. ....10

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Kinyua Karanja 21 September 2015

She must be wonderful like the poem itself. Cool poem.

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Ari Alsio 22 September 2015

Nice motherpoem. Thanks Liza

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 September 2015

when she laughs in conversations - the world smiles at me with more gleam! - she lies on the flowerbed. lovely images for your mother you prepared dear. such a praise will stand for you when you have your own children. They will praise you more as Mum. God bless you. Tony

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2021

I think i have quite a few intonations too so i smiled at this lovely fab tribute to your mom. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide s

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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

absolutely stunning..! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content.. :)

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 July 2019

wow fantastic poem a tribute poem on mother; like this style

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Chinedu Dike 05 March 2017

Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed.

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Johnmark O Okechukwu 05 November 2016

Good piece! Mother; our first love

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