My mother - a fantastic blossom,
like on a flowerbed - lies on the couch.
She has the sound of girlish voices
of twenty years when she talks.
she has so many intonations
as happy as from native fields,
and when she laughs in conversations -
the world smiles at me with more gleam! -
and when she laughs in conversations - the world smiles at me with more gleam! -.......mother's smile means smile of world too, so nicely and vividly envisioned and beautifully depicted. Thanks sharing. ....10
when she laughs in conversations - the world smiles at me with more gleam! - she lies on the flowerbed. lovely images for your mother you prepared dear. such a praise will stand for you when you have your own children. They will praise you more as Mum. God bless you. Tony
I think i have quite a few intonations too so i smiled at this lovely fab tribute to your mom. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'A recount.. of pandemic lockdowns worldwide s
absolutely stunning..! This poem, regardless of it’s powerful content.. :)
Good use of imagery. Lovely and very passionate tribute to a loving mum, nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing Liza and do remain blessed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice warm poetic celebration of one's mother. What a wonderful gift to feel such pride relative to her mother! Many people are not so lucky to think that highly of their moms. This poem catches the spirit of a woman who has retained the characteristics of a youthful, unspoiled time in her life. Good for her! and Hurrahs for a poet!