Emerald Night Poem by Agbor Enya

Emerald Night

Rating: 5.0


I will let these emotions raindrop
To create an emerald green forest
And let this colorlful teardrop
To solidify in diamond's hardness
And shine brightly to beautify the forest
To harness all your aches and sadness

Sunday, June 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: emotions,friendship,joy,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 18 June 2017

Agbor, I like the imagery, but your punctuation and usage confuse: this emotions? this emotion's? diamond's? If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks. Yrs, JC

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Agbor Enya 18 June 2017

Thank you so much for that observation.

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