Emotional Perfect Tense; Modes Of 8 And 3 Poem by Okan Emanet

Emotional Perfect Tense; Modes Of 8 And 3

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In the course of watching the movie over my face, something becomes really plain,
There is a kind of fall-in-love sensation growing either inside or outside on a plane
When the dropp falls upon my head soon after the burning sunny weather in the rain,
Thoughts turn into a sort of chaos, whereby hearts are suffering due to the blocked drain
There is neither a phrase nor a word left behind for anybody to be able to amply explain
In your pointless absence, minds and souls are charged with nonsense, going too insane
Whenever your miraculous appearance shines, I hold my breath within a heart-lain;
Trying to catch your glance in a way, this poor being is loitering on the winding lane,
Under which the veins throughout my body are smashed, hardly struggling to maintain
Gain any type of gaze, my LOYOUVE; bring my very being into existence along with the brain,
Since I have fallen into a deep hole of mindlessness and I have felled the device of sense-crane
Invent a literature featuring all types of fiction and create a utopia that will forever remain
I am in profound lack of your stars which might dropp over my all, omitting the touches to sustain
Left with a stone gathering no mass without you, this man is longing for you from any train

8-3= 5; my love is five over five, my LOYOUVE...

Within the unconscious world you don't inhabit lives a man having coins of feelings to spend,
The ground where you don't walk around is the stage on which this man has grieves to expend,
Having filled the life with so many unknown words, the man has had the respiration to suspend,
However, you are ocean apart from realizing the truth that the man has a togetherness to intend;
There is a calendar drawn here and there, the dates of which never witness the moment you attend,
My mind has built a fortress all around himself, thus being alert all the time in order to defend,
'I am the heaven where you; my LOYOUVE, live at ease', which is the statement that I contend,
The sand pieces of my soul have knelt upon your arrival, whereby they dramatically extend

8+3= 11; The first '1' is my LOYOUVE, while the second '1' is me, which refers to our marriage...

Too abrupt as it may seem, the volcanoes will erupt as I scream and ashes will dance in the breeze;
You get to monitor the living beings run up and down and hear the deafening sound they release,
In the aftermath of the action in turmoil, they will come to wonder who possesses that tease
And a heavenly voice emerges from the hole of the earth, expounding the love-spell at ease
In the wake of what has happened, your body will sense how terribly the weather will freeze
My love is like the earthquake of the moon and My love is an eternal melody, being at disease

8 * 3 = 24; I am attached to you; my LOYOUVE, even 7 over 24...

There has always existed a question in my mind since time tempted to seduce;
'At which love-stop will that heart have a rest? ' a real conflict to reproduce,
My eyes are ardently after every clicking hour that your beauty has got to use
And create a lesson whose deadline is in paradise and which will always introduce
There is a man nearby and he is crawling arduously; shed a light on me and I can induce

8 / 3 = 2,666667: Without you, I am deficient, I am insufficient and I am helpless

Just complete my sanity; my LOYOUVE so that I loyou've flown with happiness...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A very different type poem, as in a story telling. Could feel the emotion and intentions of the writer. Well expressed and lovely read! ; D

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Hans Vr 08 July 2010

Very original style, with long verses and the same rhyme persisting throughout a stanza. The style makes the reader feel the intenseness and the unchangeability of the authors feelings for the person concerned. The word choice is also very good. I really got submersed in the poem and felt along with you. Very good!

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