While flowing down with the mysterious essence,
The rivers and streams release what can be called your sense
All around the steps of the valleys shines the sun of your beauty,
Pointing the inner and outer parts of what is missing in me
Here and there, there is only one word rising; my Poetiwife
I've added myself sufficiently with the real meaning of life
Your eyes are the palace of freedom in my soul,
Your face is the expression of future in my heart,
Your voice is the sense of bliss for my all
As you see, my rhymerstar
I am head over heels in love with you...
Even though one day my body will leave that earth,
The rocks and mountains will go on screaming my eternal oath
The drops splashing the seaside will start to weep on your ways
From time to time, in between the kerbs of your walking and also for days
You will realize that the rate of my love will bleed in every aspect
The heaven or hell is going to salute my comings with their respect
Your manner is the way I behave,
Your style is what I've got to crave,
Your view is my magic
As you see,
I'm head over heels in love with you...
this is a very deep and strong write, written with passion. a 10 my friend
A lovely poem! Nice flow of words. An enjoyable read, wonderful tribute as well; D
This is a wonderfully written love poem. I like how you take elements of nature and blend them very nicely into this ode to you loved one.Very nicely done. Keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your eyes are the palace of freedom in my soul, Your face is the expression of future in my heart, these are exceptionally beautiful poetic lines within a wonderfully written love poem of dedication