Emotions Poem by dani fries

Emotions



they were given to me by you
but now i say pleas take them
away
there a form of weekeness for me
i shall not cry
i shall not hate
but these emotions just
take me away
so i ask agin
pleas take them away
and let me live
without feelings
you will sseee
how much of a
weekness they truly can
be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Corey Threet 03 September 2009

Emotions are definitely a weakness I find myself devastated by them and the ironic thing is devastation is an emotion. The pain emotion causes is something Death only can ease. But don't die we need young poets like you and I that's why my lungs still breathe. Thanks for sharing and remember...Spread Yourself! ! ! !

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Sans Serif 02 September 2009

I don't know what your emotions were when you wrote these but to me they sound sad. Well written, a good inspiration for people to.

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