Sunday, February 1, 2015

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I wish it did not hurt
I wish we made it work.
many times i ask myself why
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Samantha Cox
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2015

Love is an experience that affects the mind with a spiritual force, and its effects lingers long after the source of stimulation is gone. It is whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning, even after careful nurturing by one of the couples. Love needs care nurturing and commitment by both couples to maintain its bliss. I like the articulation and insight of the piece. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2015

Many times I ask myself why do I cry but get emptiness and no answer. Wonderful poem shared on.

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