~empty Recoil~ 2 Versions Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

All hope dims
merging dark within light,
Will the moon quake
as night casts my way?
How faint stars pale
when sacred dreams falter,
I wake wondering...

Do you imitate the feeling
when the essence of
escapes what you desire?
Do you release into nothing
feeling full within it's falseness?
What meaning does your emptiness carry
while its load bares farther down?

Does it trap you in familiar corners
as loneliness creeps near?
Does it crush with escaping breath
waking you winded in early hours?
Does it fill complete, then deplete
and in every way defeat you
Like the emptiness
I've known so well?

2006 sinnaminsun

second version below
Merging dark in light,
Will the moon quake
as night casts my way?
Faint stars pale
as dreams falter,
I wake wondering...

Do you imitate
when the essence of,
escapes what you desire?
Do you release within nothing,
feeling full within it's falseness?
What meaning does your emptiness carry, as it's baring deeper down?

Does it trap you in familiar corners,
while creeping near?
Does it crush with escaping breath,
waking you winded in early hours?
Does it fill complete, then deplete
and in every way defeat you,
As empty reigns all through this world.