Empty Space In My Heart Poem by randy peralta

Empty Space In My Heart



In my heart there is an empty space
One that makes me wonder and pace
Wondering how i could lose so much
When all thats missing is your touch
The way your touch made me feel
The way it made me shiver from my head to my heal
But now that shiver is long gone
And i don't understand what i did wrong
Was my love not enough
Please tell me was i to tough
Look into my eyes and u will see
How the happiness began to flee
Slowly causing me unbelievable pain
And happiness shrunk to the size of rain
So now i bare a hole in my chest
That just wont stop, or let me rest
So i stay up nights thinking of you
But i highly doubt that you do to
So now i have a hole i cant patch
I always knew you were a catch
In my heart there is an empty space
And i will continue to wonder and pace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varanasi Ramabrahmam 24 August 2009

Nice depiction of loss and the void that loss has created. Very involved narration and expression. But the thoughts thus arising do not leave any emptiness. Your one is with you.

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