Ending Poem by Paul Hansford

Ending

Rating: 2.9


Once we were friendly.
Then we were more than friends.
Now there is nothing.
Must this be how it ends?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 20 May 2009

Plenty of truth said in few words 10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 May 2009

There comes a point of saturation in every relationship and the poems depicts that point. Wonderful! !

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Susan Jarvis 15 May 2009

Every pertinent detail of a relationship in just 20 short and straightforward words. A whole story in 22 syllables. Every unspoken adjective adds a certain poignancy to the third line and the word 'nothing'. And... how does it end? A truly intriguing and seemingly subversive little poem. S :)

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