Ending Poem by Paul Hansford

Ending

Rating: 2.9


Once we were friendly.
Then we were more than friends.
Now there is nothing.
Must this be how it ends?

Friday, May 15, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: friends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 20 May 2009

Plenty of truth said in few words 10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 May 2009

There comes a point of saturation in every relationship and the poems depicts that point. Wonderful! !

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Susan Jarvis 15 May 2009

Every pertinent detail of a relationship in just 20 short and straightforward words. A whole story in 22 syllables. Every unspoken adjective adds a certain poignancy to the third line and the word 'nothing'. And... how does it end? A truly intriguing and seemingly subversive little poem. S :)

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