Paul Hansford

Another Sun - Poem by Paul Hansford

Perhaps in another world
another sun comes
lighting a different
and now,
where another I
could meet a second you.
Would she smile to know him there?
Would he look into her grey eyes and see
what I have seen, know
what I have known?
Perhaps in another world,
but here
spring always ends, petals
fall, and rivers
only run

Comments about Another Sun by Paul Hansford

  • Clarence Prince (12/19/2011 8:54:00 AM)

    ' Spring always ends,
    petels fall, and rivers only run downhill', very true, Paul!
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  • (7/19/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    This poem so beautifully sums up how I feel about unjust fate - I wish I'd written it! (Report) Reply

  • (5/31/2009 1:13:00 AM)

    There is a lot here left unsaid, intimated in a wise, subtle way. Less is more often in modern poetry, and this is what we want to achieve: not a framed masterpiece but an energy construct. Each reader has a poem explode inside, each our own separate poem. The creative spark is shared. Thank you for sharing it, Paul. (Report) Reply

  • (5/4/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    I'm really enjoying several of your poems. Thank you for helping to make this site so interesting. (Report) Reply

  • Emily Oldham (9/22/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    It's across betwwen reality and a dream. lovely, thanks (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2008 2:36:00 PM)

    Paul this is stunning my friend, you paint such a lovely picture for your viewer

    Thank you for sharing this amazing gift of yours '10'

    best wishes
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  • Susan Jarvis (5/23/2008 11:43:00 AM)

    This is both beautiful and clever. I love the shift from first to third person - it adds a greater depth to this poignant piece. Lovely S :) (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2008 1:50:00 PM)


    The best poem i've come across today! Excellent and easily understood. This achieves on all levels. It connects with the reader, and also has a steady point which culminates in a succesful conclusion. Really excellent man 10/10
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  • (5/15/2008 2:55:00 AM)

    Something sad, but poignant about this write...perhaps because it is a true reflection of life, love and it's fleeting moments...Coach (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 29, 2009

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