Ending Poem by Jennifer Hartman

Ending



I shoot out angular
A mass of points and
Stark straight lines
To stick you with my urgency
I'd blind you
Bruise you
To steal a response from you

These moods
Tremble and crescendo
Swerving forth waves of
Swollen blue darkness

I'm your sunshine and
Your rainstorm
I can't control the weather
You can't enjoy extremes
I'm all precipice and plummet
And I shove you off

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L M 08 July 2008

Very interesting Jennifer. I especially liked your night/day-type contrasts (such as sunshine and rain storm. It isn't a simple poem, but you make it sound as though it were.

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Madison Riley 11 November 2007

such contrast...emotional toil. This is beautiful Jen!

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