Sunday, September 11, 2016

Ending A Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

He swept it all behind the closed door,
until he just couldn't take it anymore.
it kept on building up inside,
every second a bit more he died.
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Sakshi Walia
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Kelly Kurt 11 September 2016

Indeed an emotional piece, Sakshi. Thanks

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Sakshi Walia 13 September 2016

Thank You, Kelly. Do read my other poems too and vote and comment. :)

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Preston Mwiinga 11 September 2016

so emortional.im reading and crying. great works.

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Sakshi Walia 13 September 2016

awww, glad you liked it Preston. Check out my other poems too. :)

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Sakshi Walia

Ambala, haryana
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