Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Endless Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Im lying awake as i stand asleep
Through a universe full of endless dreams
When The sky's fall and the people rise
I am here.. standing alone, left looking at the lies
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Sam Brahim
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Alan Stevens 24 October 2012

I love the imagery of this poem, really good

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Amanda Laurent 23 October 2012

The perfect beginning and end to an all around beautiful poem. Love how it flows!

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Tina Ray 23 October 2012

Very nice poem, Great writing. keep up the good work.

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