Enemies Poem by Brianna Wilshusen

Enemies

Rating: 4.3


They are here,
They're all around.
All you hold dear
Will disappear,
When you enemies come.
They'll take you're life,
Take your soul.
They'll take you down,
Make spirits run low.
They'll destroy you,
And ruin your lives.
'Till you give in,
They'll stay within.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 24 October 2007

Strong, Brianna. No added words. Pervasive wisdom, insight in the last couple lines. keep on SusxGLx

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