Friday, October 12, 2012

Energy Comments

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Can you feel the energy?
The twisting turning in the pits of my stomach
The aching in my heart
Feeling like the bottom is falling out
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Dominique Abeyta
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 October 2012

When we are happy we may feel that we are flying in the sky, as you want in this poem. the concept is good!

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