Enlightened One Poem by Sukumar Choudhuri

Sukumar Choudhuri

Balarampur Village in the District of Purulia in West Bengal.

Enlightened One

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Sin dangles inaccessibly two feet away from oppression
Betwixt the two is a serpentine stream
Which carries the Constitution

By excluding sin there can be no pleasure
Without pleasure there can not be attributes of God

Oh God, speed up oppressions
Give it the magnet-zeal, enlightenment

Sin dangles inaccessibl two feet from oppression
Nothing exists in between
Any shame, any repentance

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Allen Vinal 18 December 2004

Excellent foundation. Some grammatical/spelling issues, but overall good.

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Sukumar Choudhuri

Balarampur Village in the District of Purulia in West Bengal.
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